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Post by Redmask the fox on Feb 20, 2009 19:58:45 GMT -5
Name: Vin Quickpaw Gender: Male Age: 16 Species: sea Otter Occupation: Wanderer
Physical Appearance: Vin has dark brown fur, that gets lighter around his face. Brown eyes, is tall and was built for speed. He also has a long scar next to his right eye, starting above his eye and runs down to his jaw. He wares a white tunic with a green cloth as a belt. He also wears a pair of black pants.
Possessions A hand and a half sword and a sling. He also carries a pouch of stones, plus a dagger.
Personality:A bold fellow.and a bit quick to judge. Loves a good joke even if its on himself. He is quit stubborn and mature for his age. Vin hates vermin and will stand by any good beast. He is a bit of a rouge and likes to taunt his foes
Strengths: Fast and good with the sling Weaknesses: He is stubborn and hot tempered
History: (sorry if its not great i don't know much about sea otters.) Born on a small island in the ocean, Vin was attacked by a virmen crew. He and his family fought them back, and took there ship. Vin and some brave young otters decided to seek adventure on the sea. They named the ship the "Wave cutter" and set off. After many adventures the crew found them selves near Salamandastron. Vin and his friend Corda. Decided to seek adventure in mossflower while the Wave cutter sailed on. After reaching Mossflower Corda and vin parted ways. Corda headed north, but Vin headed south towards Redwall.
Relationships: His friend corda
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Wildrun
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One who vanished and returned.
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Post by Wildrun on Feb 20, 2009 20:13:21 GMT -5
Hullo there! I'm not an admin or anyone who can approve you, but here's some pointers-- You might want to expand on his personality just a little and beef up the Appearance a bit, maybe one or two more sentences. Once agian, I have no authroity to approve you, but I think it's really good so far and I hope you do get approved soon. Welcome to the site, you can call me Wildrun.
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Rocky
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Post by Rocky on Feb 20, 2009 20:54:07 GMT -5
Hey, man. Looking good. Just expand a bit on his appearance please, and a tad on his personality. Then it looks good to me.
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Post by Redmask the fox on Feb 21, 2009 10:04:48 GMT -5
Ok i will do that. I edited it but its still not that great.... but am i approved?
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Rocky
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Post by Rocky on Feb 21, 2009 14:42:35 GMT -5
Thanks. Accepted.
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