Rausaro - Otter

[Rausaro]

Name: Rausaro
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Species: River Otter
Occupation: Scout/Warrior/{Fisher: what otter isn't?}

Physical Appearance:
Rausaro, while a warrior, is more based on stealth. His fur is a light brown shade . Green eyes, scars on chest from prior battles, though he usually he sticks to stealth. Scar on back from nail. Pink Birthmark on right wrist; outline looks similar to a 7 number. Average build in weight, few inches taller than most. Two blue tattoo stripes on left arm from hand to shoulder: a memorial to two deceased friends.

Possessions
Rausaro wields a Wahkizashi {style: when held in right fist, blade points down, as opposed to how a sword is normally held.
Wears light shark leather vest, belt, and Kilt.
Has wrist guard on right wrist to deflect daggers and light blows. Clothes are unassuming colors. Silver ring on right hand. Wears a grey hooded robe when sneaking around.

Personality:
Defender type. Kind, but not very social. Loves books and history, which is a bit odd for the stereotypical otter. Patient to a degree, but will become uneasy and anxious with continued lack of action. He's gotten in trouble a few times by acting too soon. Extremely loyal to a cause, and to friends.

Strengths:
Excells at History, hearing, and sight. Loves nature, eats almost anything {No, I'm not a thingyroach {LOL AT Auto censor} XD} Good endurance makes up somewhat for lack of direct strength. Veteran of a few minor scuffles, but prefers one on one combat over group combat. Loves fishing and hunting small creatures {aka. Crawdads, small lizards, crabs, etc.} Very quiet when moving. Loves to improvise: if it's hard, its a weapon.

Weaknesses:
Blows to the face will usually catch him off guard; defensive reflexes make him cover his face, leaving him wide open to stabbing and jabbing attacks.
Has irrational fear of deep, murky water; leaves him wide open to mockery from fellow otters. Uneasy in large gatherings {social}
Only of average otter strength. Not trained for speed.

History:Traveled from the North. Raised by Sea Otters. One of four young River Otters that survived a shipwreck. Not related to other otters. Has been to Redwall a few times. Allied with a Kingfisher, though the bird only occasionally appears. Hates pointless killings by vermin due to carnage he's found in the past. Because of his upbringing, he is a very loyal creature.
Relationships:
None\Distant Holt

Other
Character actually is a survivor of another Redwall Rpg. For obvious reasons, I have to do a bit of reconstruction to make him good for this rpg.

Quirks Rau loves Water, though ironically, he dislikes brine water. Likes mountains and deserts. Hates pike.


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How's this looking?

[Blackbeak Silvertalon]

Well, I see your history is rather short. He should have something he's done in his life, being 19 and all. Heck, describe one part of it if you like. The minimum is 8 sentances. Everything else looks good ^.^

[Rausaro]

How's this look now? Anything else?

[Rausaro]

Hello? Still waiting to be approved.

[Ashstripe]

I apologise for the late response, I'll speak for myself - life has gotten a lot more complicated lately. As for the other Staff I'm fairly sure their lives aren't exactly care-free either.

And I do assure you, whenever I do log on, I check these things. So there is no need to bump the thread or anything like that.

Now I will tell you right now that I am rather picky about this stuff.

Traveled from the North. Raised by Sea Otters. One of four young River Otters that survived a shipwreck. Not related to other otters. Has been to Redwall a few times. Allied with a Kingfisher, though the bird only occasionally appears. Hates pointless killings by vermin due to carnage he's found in the past. Because of his upbringing, he is a very loyal creature.

Your history meets the minimum length and all, but it can be better. What you've done here is basically fire off his life in bullet points. A more better option is to make it similar to a story. Nothing major or epic, just a little spiel. For example, and this is my interpretation of what you have mind you;

"Rausaro was born and raised in the North, he was rescued from a shipwreck along the coast by a group of Sea Otters whom eventually welcomed into their ranks as one of their own."

You could even throw in a bit about how he met the Kingfisher and so on.

I will approve the profile, but I'm just giving you pointers, tis' all.