Post by Shor on Dec 5, 2009 18:30:42 GMT -5
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First part's a flashback.
Second part's in real time.
He couldn't see anything beyond the obstruction of two large, calloused paws. If memory served correctly, the room was cleared of all objects, save for the chair upon which he sat.
"What do you see?" asked a gruff voice, evidently the owner of the calloused paws. Barr scanned the empty room as he voiced the question, noting that all distractions had been removed. Lachina had done well.
Lachie sighed, recognizing the question from the last time. This was going to become a regular thing, wasn't it? He might as well answer just as before. "I can't; ye're coverin' my eyes. . ."
"Not now," came the stern reply, "before. With the mouse."
Lachie searched his memory for something with which Barr would be concerned. . . Oh! "You were there?"
"Aye."
"An' I suppose I failed that test, then?"
"Absolutely."
"Wot else?"
"Tell me about 'im -- the beast that interrupted you."
He must have been referring to the one that had tried to walk through the remains of the burnt house. "Well, Bruff yelled at 'im, an' nearly made my ears bleed. Never seen anybeast so--"
"No, Lachlan. Tell me about the other one. The one who's yelled at."
He sighed again, remembering back to the incident. ". . . He's young. Married. Had to 'ave been with 'er less than a season. . . 'e looks worried, an' prob'ly stayed up all night. . ." Lachie trailed off, not yet seeing anything more.
"Anything else?" Barr asked.
"Is that a. . . It looked like he 'ad a burn, 'r scorch mark on 'is ankle. I only catch a glimpse of it as 'e runs away. . ."
"Why was he there? Surely he didn't fail to notice the ashes everywhere. D'ye see anythin' suspicious?
"No, n-- Wait. . . I think 'e stole something!"
Barr smiled. "That's more like it. . ."
"All right, I'm gonna try to take a few steps that way. Hold on. . ." A large otter held upright a younger otter, who was having quite the difficult time of walking. The smaller of the two put a footpaw forward, gingerly applying his weight to the ground there. Though in pain, he continued moving forward.
"Ay-- Er, les try there," he grunted, pointing to a patch of softer earth. His paw clenched tightly in the shape of a fist, he took another agonizing step.
His father gave him a concerned look. "Are ye sure ye don't want to quit, Lachie? We can st--"
"No, no," Lachlan interrupted with a shake of the head. "Let's jus'. . . jus' go. . ."
Barr's eye glanced over at Lachie's wheelchair, wondering if it were best to reach over, and pull the contraption closer in case of Lachie being unable to traverse the distance between him and the soft earth. Lachie caught the eye movement, and dispelled the idea from Barr's mind by taking another hasty step toward the patch.
Barr opened his mouth to speak up, but stop upon seeing Lachie's eyes, steadily fixed on his destination. Stubborn otter he was. . . It reminded Barr of himself.
Finally, after several tedious moments, Lachie reached the soft patch of earth, thereupon collapsing into a sitting position. Wincing from the pain walking had caused him, he gestured blindly with his left paw. "Ye can get mah chair now. . ." A slight touch of his "uncle's" dialect slipped through his speech.
Barr did so posthaste, lifting a now confused seer into his self-named "wheely-chair." Lachie dismissed the impulse to ask why he'd had to have been put into his chair -- he could do so quite easily on his own -- and simply relaxed, attempting to regain his usual composure.
Now, it was interesting that these two otters were out in the middle of Mossflower wood, especially considering their purpose, which was to help the younger practice walking. You see, Lachlan was not very apt at walking as of late. An injury from the previous shipwreck had made certain of that. A season later, specifically two weeks, one day, and thirteen hours ago, a reluctant visit to Redwall's Infirmary gave Lachie a second chance with his ability to walk. As much as Lachie did not want to undergo surgery, he did enjoy being able to walk. Now, weeks later, Lachie was working hard in order to begin walking as soon as possible. Unfortunately, the healers of the abbey did not approve, encouraging him to wait until his leg healed significantly, but if the otter started working with it now, he wouldn't have to wait nearly as long. Sure, it was more painful, but it would save him an extra season of confinement to his wheelchair. Therefore, Lachie practiced walking frequently, traveling out into Mossflower to avoid the persistent healers. For some reason, they simply would not allow Lachlan to even stand for a moment. Apparently, the pain and added stress did nothing to help his frequent flashbacks, another result from the shipwreck. He would never get over his post-traumatic-stress disorder at this rate, but the way he saw it, the worst that could happen would be for him to launch into a fugue from the severe mental stress. He wouldn't mind that so much. Can't have flashbacks with amnesia. That would be tantamount to a narcoleptic insomniac.
Barr shook his head at the young otter. What kind of insanity drove a beast to endure excruciating pain against the wishes of healers, all so he could walk sooner? The lad had no patience.
Lachie inhaled deeply, then turned to look at his father. "Right then, should we go n--?"
Barr tilted his head. "Lachie?--"
The seer held up a paw for silence. "I think somebeast's coming. . ." he whispered after a long pause. He could hear heavy breathing in the westerly direction. Barr's paw strayed to the hilt of his sword, which he'd managed to smuggle from the abbey's cellars (where the abbeybeasts had unsuccessfully hidden it) shortly before he and Lachie had left.
Just before Lachie caught sight of the beast, a sick feeling struck him. This would not be the most pleasant of encounters.
First part's a flashback.
Second part's in real time.
He couldn't see anything beyond the obstruction of two large, calloused paws. If memory served correctly, the room was cleared of all objects, save for the chair upon which he sat.
"What do you see?" asked a gruff voice, evidently the owner of the calloused paws. Barr scanned the empty room as he voiced the question, noting that all distractions had been removed. Lachina had done well.
Lachie sighed, recognizing the question from the last time. This was going to become a regular thing, wasn't it? He might as well answer just as before. "I can't; ye're coverin' my eyes. . ."
"Not now," came the stern reply, "before. With the mouse."
Lachie searched his memory for something with which Barr would be concerned. . . Oh! "You were there?"
"Aye."
"An' I suppose I failed that test, then?"
"Absolutely."
"Wot else?"
"Tell me about 'im -- the beast that interrupted you."
He must have been referring to the one that had tried to walk through the remains of the burnt house. "Well, Bruff yelled at 'im, an' nearly made my ears bleed. Never seen anybeast so--"
"No, Lachlan. Tell me about the other one. The one who's yelled at."
He sighed again, remembering back to the incident. ". . . He's young. Married. Had to 'ave been with 'er less than a season. . . 'e looks worried, an' prob'ly stayed up all night. . ." Lachie trailed off, not yet seeing anything more.
"Anything else?" Barr asked.
"Is that a. . . It looked like he 'ad a burn, 'r scorch mark on 'is ankle. I only catch a glimpse of it as 'e runs away. . ."
"Why was he there? Surely he didn't fail to notice the ashes everywhere. D'ye see anythin' suspicious?
"No, n-- Wait. . . I think 'e stole something!"
Barr smiled. "That's more like it. . ."
"All right, I'm gonna try to take a few steps that way. Hold on. . ." A large otter held upright a younger otter, who was having quite the difficult time of walking. The smaller of the two put a footpaw forward, gingerly applying his weight to the ground there. Though in pain, he continued moving forward.
"Ay-- Er, les try there," he grunted, pointing to a patch of softer earth. His paw clenched tightly in the shape of a fist, he took another agonizing step.
His father gave him a concerned look. "Are ye sure ye don't want to quit, Lachie? We can st--"
"No, no," Lachlan interrupted with a shake of the head. "Let's jus'. . . jus' go. . ."
Barr's eye glanced over at Lachie's wheelchair, wondering if it were best to reach over, and pull the contraption closer in case of Lachie being unable to traverse the distance between him and the soft earth. Lachie caught the eye movement, and dispelled the idea from Barr's mind by taking another hasty step toward the patch.
Barr opened his mouth to speak up, but stop upon seeing Lachie's eyes, steadily fixed on his destination. Stubborn otter he was. . . It reminded Barr of himself.
Finally, after several tedious moments, Lachie reached the soft patch of earth, thereupon collapsing into a sitting position. Wincing from the pain walking had caused him, he gestured blindly with his left paw. "Ye can get mah chair now. . ." A slight touch of his "uncle's" dialect slipped through his speech.
Barr did so posthaste, lifting a now confused seer into his self-named "wheely-chair." Lachie dismissed the impulse to ask why he'd had to have been put into his chair -- he could do so quite easily on his own -- and simply relaxed, attempting to regain his usual composure.
Now, it was interesting that these two otters were out in the middle of Mossflower wood, especially considering their purpose, which was to help the younger practice walking. You see, Lachlan was not very apt at walking as of late. An injury from the previous shipwreck had made certain of that. A season later, specifically two weeks, one day, and thirteen hours ago, a reluctant visit to Redwall's Infirmary gave Lachie a second chance with his ability to walk. As much as Lachie did not want to undergo surgery, he did enjoy being able to walk. Now, weeks later, Lachie was working hard in order to begin walking as soon as possible. Unfortunately, the healers of the abbey did not approve, encouraging him to wait until his leg healed significantly, but if the otter started working with it now, he wouldn't have to wait nearly as long. Sure, it was more painful, but it would save him an extra season of confinement to his wheelchair. Therefore, Lachie practiced walking frequently, traveling out into Mossflower to avoid the persistent healers. For some reason, they simply would not allow Lachlan to even stand for a moment. Apparently, the pain and added stress did nothing to help his frequent flashbacks, another result from the shipwreck. He would never get over his post-traumatic-stress disorder at this rate, but the way he saw it, the worst that could happen would be for him to launch into a fugue from the severe mental stress. He wouldn't mind that so much. Can't have flashbacks with amnesia. That would be tantamount to a narcoleptic insomniac.
Barr shook his head at the young otter. What kind of insanity drove a beast to endure excruciating pain against the wishes of healers, all so he could walk sooner? The lad had no patience.
Lachie inhaled deeply, then turned to look at his father. "Right then, should we go n--?"
Barr tilted his head. "Lachie?--"
The seer held up a paw for silence. "I think somebeast's coming. . ." he whispered after a long pause. He could hear heavy breathing in the westerly direction. Barr's paw strayed to the hilt of his sword, which he'd managed to smuggle from the abbey's cellars (where the abbeybeasts had unsuccessfully hidden it) shortly before he and Lachie had left.
Just before Lachie caught sight of the beast, a sick feeling struck him. This would not be the most pleasant of encounters.