(Nameless) - Weasel babe (1st draft)

[Tulian Solum]

Updated finally >.< . Sorry it took so long.

[Prankster101]

Hello Tulian Solum!

Okay, to start off, you need to look over your profile for errors. The errors are ones the spell check will not find so you might want to read it over out loud so you can find them and not read over them reading what you think is there, not what really is there.

And the other thing. If the babe is 4, even if his parents have drilled the name into him, logically, he should still know his name. I'm just having trouble seeing how he wouldn't know. Now if he had amnesia or some sort of memory loss, that would make sense, but just not knowing, doesn't too me.

Other than those two things, I don't really see an issue. If you could do those things (or discuss the second one in a post in this thread) I wouldn't mind approving it.

Nice Job,

Prank


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