Dawnreth Longblade

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Name: Dawnreth Longblade

Gender: Female

Age: 18 seasons

Species: Badger

Occupation: Lady of Fort Longblade

Physical Appearance:Rather tall and lithe for a badger, gray eyes that match the color of the sea

She wears a cream tunic and swordbelt, copper wristguards

Possessions: Sack of rations, Longsword,

Personality: Jolly, caring, sometimes quick-tempered, hates vermin

Strengths: physical strength, stubbornness

Weaknesses:Stubbornness, temper

History:Born in Green Forest to Nightstripe and Willow Longblade. Her parents were from enemy clans but married anyway and were banished from their clans. They wandered for a long time when Dawnreth was a little one finally returning to Fort Longblade, they stayed there for awhile but moved on and left her there. Now a young badger, Dawnreth traveled in search of her parents to the shores of Mossflower.

Relationships:Father-Nightstripe Longblade
Mother-Willow Wildbrock Longblade

[Prankster101]

Hello Dawnreth Longblade!

Welcome to Legends of Redwall Abbey! It's great to have you here and it's great to see you've started making a bio!

Here at LoRA we have a Profile format that we follow which it looks like you have already found. But before it can be approved, may I advise a few thing to be done.

First, for a Badger. Normally for this species, as the number of badgers is limited, you would need Moderator approval, but as the few badgers we have are pretty much inactive, your fine. But, just so you know for future reference.

Secondly, on this cite, although we do put seasons on the profile format (sorry if that caused confusion), we like to go by human years. With 4 seasons= 1 human year. So you can put the age in human years or in seasons if you like, but currently your bio says that your character is 4.5 years old.

For the Appearances, farther down on the Profile Format page Link! Click me!
is says that it must have at least 6 sentences and be detailed. We want to know what your character really looks like. Do they have half an ear missing? Any scars or birthmarks? Do they wear only one set of clothes or do they have a special set for parties?Etc.

Although there are no limits on Possession detail, I would still like to see a little bit more. Maybe describe what is in the sack and what her longsword looks like.

Personality is just like the Appearances. We require at least 4 sentences in this category. We want to know more about how your character acts and thinks. Are they happy because they grew up in a happy home? Why do they have a resentment for vermin? Etc.

The History is also very similar. We require at least 8 sentences, possibly even more, depending on your creature's age. (If they are older, then they would obviously have a longer history than that of a dibbun.) And again, we want to know more about their character. What are the juicy details about their past? Who were their childhood friends, if they had any? How did they come to their occupation? Where are they now?

Anyways, this is a great start and I don't mean to be a stickler or rude, but we here at LoRA want you to be able to be the best you can be!

Your mate on the Admin team,
Prankster101 ;D