Sparra Feathertail

[Poisonsnarl the Vicious]

Name: Sparra Queen Feathertail
Gender: Female
Age: 15 Seasons
Species: Sparrow
Occupation: Sparra

Physical Appearance: She is black, with a white tail-tip, and blood-red talons. Her beak is the same red colour with small patches of orange. Her eyes are bright green, and her under-feathers are a greyish-blue. She allways wears a necklace with a fraction of an Adder tooth on it.

Possessions: A necklace with a fraction of an Adder tooth on it.

Personality: Feathertail is a mercillous, perrilous beast. She will slay anyone in her path, excluding her dear friend Jillian. She's on decent terms with Redwall, but is closer to Salamandastron ever since Jillian healed her broken leg after combat once.


Strengths: She's a skilled fighter, very brawny and smart. She is best at head-to-head physical combat.

Weaknesses: She's not a strong flyer. Her wings are dainty, and she can barely leave ground with anything in her talons.

History: Her parents were slain when a large group of sea rats threatened their ally, Salamandastron. The Sparras went leaderless for three seasons, before Feathertail decided to step up. She took charge very aggressively, so there were no arguements.

Relationships:
Friend(s): Jillian Flickscut, Long Patroll Commander.
Known relatives: Daughter of Warbeak, former Sparra Queen, and son of Downtail, former Sparra King.

Other:
Birth Place: Redwall
Residence: Redwall
Occupation: Sparra Queen
Social Class: Very High
Economic Class: Fairly Low
Alignment: Good
Likes/Favorite activities: Fighting, eating, traveling with Jillian
Dislikes/Least favorite activities: Flying
Gourmet of choice: Blackberries
Beverages of choice: Elderberry Wine
Favorite color(s): Midnight Black, Plum Purple

[Rakko Streamwater]

I know I don't have this power but since I recruted ye I feel it's my duty to let ye know, yer History, personality, and PA is going to need to be extended.

History: Talk about how they were slain and why. What positions has she been put in as such a young leader. Did it take the others long to recognize her as their new leader?

Personality: How is she with her enemies? Is she a merciless fighter or does she give chances to her warriors. Is she friendly with other non-vermin creatures? is she on good terms with the Abbey?

PA: What colour are her eyes? Are her under feathers black as well? You should also mention the necklace in yer PA.

[Ashstripe]

Personality is a bit short, but it does cover the necessities..I'm really unsure of what else to suggest on that. A few examples of her attitude perhaps? *Shrugs*

History, quite short. Very much so. Be more descriptive, a characters history is what made them who they are today, who killed her parents? Why did they do it? What did she do about it? Shrug and lead the Sparra's off into the sunset? What kind of war and violence? Was she challenged for her position due to her age? And so on.


EDIT: Bleh, Rakko got a fair bit ahead of me. What she said.

[Rakko Streamwater]

Sorry Ashstripe, i didn't know ye were on and I wanted her to perfect her profile before an Admin saw it.

[Ashstripe]

Haha don't worry about it ^^; It's good that your willing to help out. Saves me time. And time is good. Means I get to waste it on something pointless XD

[Rakko Streamwater]

oh. There should be a little button that says 'Modify'. ye can click on that and modify yer original post.

It looks fairly good though if ye just put it in the original post.

Also, i thought the Sparras had their own place of resedence...

[Poisonsnarl the Vicious]

They live in the Abbey Attic (or so far as I've read xD)

[Rakko Streamwater]

kk, Now its up to a mod to accept it

[Poisonsnarl the Vicious]

I hope so ^^

[Ashstripe]

Mmm righto..Time being act as if she isn't Sparra Queen, since you have to formally apply and get approved by the Staff(That is, the majority.).

Time being though I'll let you RP her as a plain Sparra, for now at least.

Approved.