Scalarius the Fear-Lizard

[scalariusthefear]

I'm not good at describing or typing but you guy's well be the judge of that)

Name: Scalarius the Fear
Gender: Male
Age: 30 years
Species: Monitor Lizard
Occupation: Strategist

Physical Appearance:
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Scalarius is a blue lizard who wears only a cape and carries a sword in battle. The look in his eyes is very frighting - it's like seeing yourself being killed by your own fear. He earned the name death eyes from this.

Possessions:
Scalarius carries a sword, cape, and a suit of armor (battle only).

Personality:
Scalarius is a very foul-tempered lizard who lacks a sense of humor and will do whatever it takes to win.

Strengths:
The most intelligent lizard in Redwall history that knows no limit to his strategies. Scalarius is also a worthy adversary when it comes to fighting. So far, anyone who fought him in the night either wound up dead or left dying.

Weaknesses:
He is a good strategist, but his plans and strategies don't always succeed. Whenever he is at the point of fierce anger, he will lose focus and eventually lose. He is only afraid of Nigias, the king of all snakes.

History
Scalarius was born near Salamandastron and grew up as a brave fighter. After his parents died, he and Redscale went their separate ways, driving them to become enemies. In no time he beaten insane to a point where he believed his brother was responsible for their parents' death. From that point on, he swore that he would slay him.

Relationships:
Redscale - Brother

Other
his horde of lizards fear him more than any other creature so they well do whatever it takes to avoid getting on his bad side

[Ashstripe]

Oh boy.

Spell-check is your friend run that before you hit 'Post Reply' or get a browser like Fire-fox(Which is much better then IE anyway) that has spell-check built in and helps as you go.

Use this format(Copy and paste and work from there);

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[b]Occupation:[/b] (What does your character do? [i.e. - helper, mercenary, etc.])

[b]Physical Appearance:[/b]
(Your character's appearance. Please be thorough in your description. Include clothing, fur, body structure, etc.)

[b]Possessions[/b]
(What does your character carry around with them?)

[b]Personality:[/b]
(How does your character act?)

[b]Strengths:[/b]
(Your strengths may not outweigh your weaknesses by more than one.)

[b]Weaknesses:[/b]
(At least two; there is no such thing as a perfect character.)

[b]History:[/b]
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Your missing history, but that can be remedied with the right format. Personality is too short, try expanding on it, as well as everything else. Be descriptive; Is he tall? Short? Gruff? Polite? Good? Evil? Educated? A brute? What kind of accent does he have? Being a lizard, reptiles tend to exaggerate their 's', but that's a stereotype. It's your call.

I think Lizards are on the special permission or forbidden list, I'll have to clarify.

[scalariusthefear]

ashstripe said:

Oh boy.

Spell-check is your friend run that before you hit 'Post Reply' or get a browser like Fire-fox(Which is much better then IE anyway) that has spell-check built in and helps as you go.

Use this format(Copy and paste and work from there);

[b]Name:[/b] (Your character's name)
[b]Gender:[/b] (M/F only)
[b]Age:[/b] (Age in human years; 4 seasons to a year)
[b]Species:[/b] (Check the Encyclopaedia for a list of playable species.)
[b]Occupation:[/b] (What does your character do? [i.e. - helper, mercenary, etc.])

[b]Physical Appearance:[/b]
(Your character's appearance. Please be thorough in your description. Include clothing, fur, body structure, etc.)

[b]Possessions[/b]
(What does your character carry around with them?)

[b]Personality:[/b]
(How does your character act?)

[b]Strengths:[/b]
(Your strengths may not outweigh your weaknesses by more than one.)

[b]Weaknesses:[/b]
(At least two; there is no such thing as a perfect character.)

[b]History:[/b]
(Your character's past. Please be thorough and provide as much information as possible in regard to your character's life.)

[b]Relationships:[/b]
(Relatives or friends? [Please ask before adding another member to your relationship list.])

[b]Other[/b]
(Any other relevant information you would like to add? Omit this if you have nothing else to say.)

Your missing history, but that can be remedied with the right format. Personality is too short, try expanding on it, as well as everything else. Be descriptive; Is he tall? Short? Gruff? Polite? Good? Evil? Educated? A brute? What kind of accent does he have? Being a lizard, reptiles tend to exaggerate their 's', but that's a stereotype. It's your call.

I think Lizards are on the special permission or forbidden list, I'll have to clarify.

thanks for the info on the critiscism but when i checked the list the monitor lizards were playable

[Ashstripe]

But they do require special permission. Anyways fix up the format and we can go from there. Your missing history.

[scalariusthefear]

I hope that well do it

[tSoMtW]

Looks all right so far, though the lizard army is questionable, as well as his extreme strategical prowess. Do you seek to become a warlord?

[scalariusthefear]

admin said:

Looks all right so far, though the lizard army is questionable, as well as his extreme strategical prowess. Do you seek to become a warlord?

Yes

[tSoMtW]

Very well. However, I'll have to ask that you tone your character down just a tad, all right?
I hope you will not disappoint us, Scalarius. I'll PM you with details regarding warlordship.

Approved. Welcome to Redwall.